ArtistJ's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DNB - Fork 'n' Spoon]

ok look... I hate to be critical because...

i hate to be a harsh critic because honestly it It was A Good effort. I liked the fake ng Rewiew part alot where everything was all messed up. Its a weak premise though. Your plot was jumpy and not very fluid at all. Next time i think you should think out your film abit more so that its actualy funny. The voices annoyed the hell out of me too. I know the way the prononce things is the whole premise but seriously this was annoying. I can relate though. People hate the voices in my cartoon "imaginary" Anyhow you have some skill as an animater, and should maybe get a script fropm a writter on the bbs boards or something. good luck on your future endeavours. (hope my spelling wasnt as aweful as the kid in your cartoon on the review page lol)

smige2 responds:

thanks for the review.

you either find the whole joke funny or you dont...and you didnt. i know the voices were annoying, well, the foreign guys was, but it was supposed to be...i am not going to get a script from the bbs though, me and my scriptwriting partner fudgehead are a team and we're not gonna get someone else to script it.

[Toilet Duck Adventures #1]

oh my

This is increadibly creative, and very funny. Theres a little too much reliance on bitmaps, and thy arent cut out all that well, (i would have traced em), and the way the music fits is nothing short of brilliant. Very enjoyable indeed. I cant wait for episode 2

radioheadrule responds:

Thank you! I considered making them well cut out before I posted it here. Cutting the characters out was the first thing I did, but I chose to leave them as they are. I liked the messiness originally but if other people think I should I may draw Toilet Duck and Pine Fresh myself from now on and update this cartoon that way too. What do people think?