sound...
I know you already mentioned this in your author comments, and you know about the problems, but if you cant do the audio well yourself you should either buy the equipment like a boom mic or something and use a software to equalize the audio volumes. the audio cutting out at parts has a severly negative inpact on the delivery of jokes and makes the cartoon unpleasent to view...
so if you cant do the audio yourself you need to find someone else to do it for you. There are plenty of great voice actors on newgrounds forums with great mic's and its easy to learn how to organize audio outside of flash with other applications.
i sugest you take the needed action to revamp this cartoon and any future cartoons you make, because the ideas and graphics are fantastic, but need to be deliverd properly.